A Bug's Life

Wow, I love it! The only bit my brain got stuck on is when the cops arrived, the men neither tried to run, nor blamed each other (a swing and a "you pillock, you've ruined it") but just froze. In my nighbourhood, the drugs get tossed into a garden while the people flee into other gardens - or try to.

It was an interesting twist that the younger man was her brother not her partner; from the accents I assumed she'd been trafficked and was stuck in the household (again, based on a real household in my neighbourhood). That the black eye was from not wanting to be passed around several men. So, how come she was his sister, with a different accent?

But I thought the camerawork was good, and sound effects crisp and not distracting. Great job! I really liked it and I'm impressed by the standard.